1. Solid poem. I enjoyed the self reflection and especially the line, “How could I believe I owned you, as random as a five dollar bill.” It was very powerful by showing the severity of the possessive relationship.

  2. There is both that sense of letting go, wanting to be forgiven emotional expressions that I enjoy. “If you love something, let it go” powerful line

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