I’ve Become
All purpose flavor
a bit of salt, baking powder
and an ice cream scoop of manteca
plus plenty of water to make the
right consistency for the masa.
Flat and round as possible, two or three
minutes on the hot comal,
I’ve become… a homemade tortilla
Throughout the years
I’ve become many things in life
a son
the baby boy
a little big brother
who is so bright but at the beginning
was so innocent
shy
timid and curious with life.
In life
can’t deny my Chicano pride.
Never having to gang bang, but having that
Mas chingon cholo swagger.
Looks can be deceiving, who would have known,
I’ve become a true convict, a pinto, as the fellow
I’ve become a true convict, a pinto, as the fellow
Burquenos
homies, call it down here.
It wasn’t planned by me Chale
I’ve become what my path leads me to
A purpose, an inspiration to others.
I’ve become an experiment for others.
I’ve become an example
Please I ask you don’t have me make one out of you.
I’ve become something that I’m proud of, not by choice…
a beaner.
~JJ aka JS
I Have Become
When I look back on my life
I could sit here and feel sorry
for myself, and say that life dealt
me a bad deal.
I could blame my
problems on the physical, mental, and
sexual abuse I experienced as a child
I could say that the
people I hung out with as a teenager
influenced me and brought me down.
I could tell you some sad story,
and play the victim about
how my life has panned out
But I choose to look beyond these walls,
to look at the positive rather than the negative.
So you ask what I have become…
I’ve become a person that looks past the color of your skin.
I’ve become a person that doesn’t let society bring her down
because of their bigotry.
I’ve become a person who forgives, rather than blames
I’ve become a person that expresses her pain.
I’ve become a person that
holds her head held high, when facing adversity.
I’ve become a person who
refuses to play the victim
“I’ve become a survivor!”
~DD
I’ve Become
I’ve become another statistic of an
environment I claim home. Sad to say
I’m more afraid to go home to a full house of
family but a heart of nothingness
due to a self-inflicted tragedy
I call myself.
My life starting over
from under the supervision of another
I’ve become unserving of myself ’cause
of all the flaws I have
In a perfect world
environment I claim home. Sad to say
I’m more afraid to go home to a full house of
family but a heart of nothingness
due to a self-inflicted tragedy
I call myself.
My life starting over
from under the supervision of another
I’ve become unserving of myself ’cause
of all the flaws I have
In a perfect world
in some’s eyes
my heart covered in scars
my arms in tracks
all the pain I’ve given
that I can’t take back
It’s easy to say
what I’ve become
what I’ve become
but seems hard as fuck to remember
any good things I’ve done.
I’ve become a
liar, a cheat, a thief, slash drug addict
liar, a cheat, a thief, slash drug addict
What a son…
Well, I’m at the bottom now looking up
haunted by the sound of a key
look what I’ve become.
look what I’ve become.
~SMS
JJ aka JS
I love, love, love the refernce to becoming a tortilla! I grew up watching my Gramma and mama making homemade tortillas and it is such a big part of who we are!
“I’ve become what my path leads me to
A purpose, an inspiration to others.”
These two lines hold so much power. Never forgetting who you are, that we all serve a purpose.
SVT
DD
“I choose to look beyond these walls,
to look at the positive rather than the negative.”
Knowing we all face bad times, yet still having the ability to retain hope is one of the greatest feats imaginable.
SVT
SMS
This one hit home for me because it was like I could hear my cousin’s voice reading it. I saw him in your words and they hold so much depth.
“I’m more afraid to go home to a full house of
family but a heart of nothingness
due to a self-inflicted tragedy
I call myself.”
He said something like this once. I can feel the strength of emotion in your piece. Sometimes no one understands the feelings we have, except a paper and pen. Keep writing, find your peace in your words.
SVT
I really loved this piece! This is so empowering and great to see how someone evolves past their troubles. My favorite part is the ending:
“I’ve become a person who
refuses to play the victim
‘I’ve become a survivor!’”
– AN
This rhyme is really great!:
“my heart covered in scars
my arms in tracks
all the pain I’ve given
that I can’t take back”
I actually really like restating the prompt at the end of the piece. It emphasizes a serious self reflection on their life, which is the point of the prompt. This whole poem answers it well:
“Well, I’m at the bottom now looking up
haunted by the sound of a key
look what I’ve become.”
I really enjoyed reading this piece by SMS.
Twisted descriptions, great methaphors. The author played with the words, and owned the poem. the truth was told in a blunt way but very poetic
GPL
SMS,
I love the flow of your poem and the reality of the honesty of what things the author has encountered throughout their life. really portrays a certain sense of decency within the context.
SMS,
I’m in love with the truthfulness and realness of this poem.
It’s flow and words are are smooth.
It has a very catchy beginning, “I’ve become another statistic of an.”
JJ
I enjoyed reading about becoming a homemade tortilla. That is a cool little section. Thank you for a little trip to home.